Where Did That Come From? Phantom Queen

The Phantom Empire, starring Gene Autry, is a matinee serial that is part musical, part western and part sci-fi adventure. It’s not really very good at being any one of those things, but when I was a kid, it taught me that genre was more of a guideline than an actual rule. That was reinforced by some of the Hindi and Tamil movies I explored as an adult. The musical counterterrorist thriller/romcom Thuppaki, and its Bollywood version Holiday, are good examples of mashups that worked for their target audiences.

At any rate, the main image I retained from The Phantom Empire was of an arrogant woman lording it over an underground city. I made at least one attempt to write my own version of it in middle school. Life went on. I read H. Rider Haggard’s She, and decided the only characters I liked were the narrator/supporting character Horace Holly and Ustane, another supporting character who gets killed because Ayesha (the title character) sees her as competition for the love of boring himbo Leo Vincey.

Haggard wanted people to see Leo as a heroic figure and Ayesha as a tragic anti-heroine destined to be purified (in the sequel) by reincarnation and vaguer forms of woo-woo. He devoted a whole paragraph of his foreword to shooting down Holly/Ayesha shippers, which tells you something about the feedback he was getting before publication. For my part, I mostly felt that Ayesha was a villainess, and Holly was the real hero of the piece, and the Ursula Andress film version from the mid-sixties appealed to me because it…kind of almost looked like the makers agreed with me? At least on Ayesha’s villainy, anyway.

Sometime in the 00s, when I was making my first fumbling attempts to write actual novels, I brainstormed an idea I called The Phantom Queen. It went through a few variations, including a post-apocalyptic western about a couple of roving cowboy troubadours broadcasting from the wasteland, but the gist of it was always the same. The young, dashing man who turns out to be an empty suit; his wiser and kinder mentor; the glamorously evil Queen of a subterranean city; the well-meaning woman forced to serve her and destined to fall for the mentor. I didn’t write it at that time, and it eventually faded to the background.

Then, sometime in the middle of writing Undead Flight, the idea returned to me as a kind of backstory for Maxim os Storm’s parents. The steampunky Drill and the dragon wandered in as well at that point, possibly inspired by the film version of At The Earth’s Core. (No, they don’t call it a dragon in that movie, but as of the point you have a giant fire-breathing lizard that dies to an arrow-shot ala Smaug, it’s a distinction without a difference.)

Some more references to the evil Queen emerged over the course of writing Dragon’s Teeth. By the time I was done with that one, I had a pretty fair idea of what my next book in that setting was going to be. Phantom Queen is a prequel. Maxim’s parents, his uncles, and the underground city where a glamorous woman has been ruling longer than for thousands of years. It is gaslamp fantasy with a Drill, a dragon, and a slow-burn romance. There is no explicit content, and there is plenty of drama.

It comes out on the 16th and is available to preorder now.

If you are new to the series, I would read it fourth. I explain why here.

Hunter Healer King Reading Order, and Why Phantom Queen Goes Last

Once upon a time, Hunter Healer King was a simple trilogy. It told the story of a cowgirl with a knife and a doctor with a gun and a royal destiny. They hunted monsters together, and fell in love. Then, I got interested in telling the story of the doctor’s parents, and that became my upcoming release, Phantom Queen. If you’re new to the series, here’s the order I’d read it in:

  1. Wolf’s Trail: Chloe frees the wrong man, and gets turned into a werewolf for her pains. Maxim turns out to be the only doctor who can cure her.
  2. Undead Flight: Maxim is to be crowned aboard an airship. A monster is lurking somewhere aboard, and Chloe must help him destroy it in between coming to terms with her feelings for him.
  3. Dragon’s Teeth: Chloe’s marriage to Maxim may be doomed before it begins. That won’t stop them from facing down a killer in the city, and a dragon flying over it.
  4. Phantom Queen: Eighty years earlier, Maxim’s father drills into a dying kingdom and meets the woman who will become Maxim’s mother. Out November 16.

That’s publication order, and it’s also the order I’d choose.

The books connect. Each has its own monster-hunting case, but the romance and the kingship carry through all three, and Dragon’s Teeth opens with the aftermath of Undead Flight. Starting with book two might theoretically work, but you’ll be a little behind, and it’s more fun to start at the start.

Why Phantom Queen goes last. It takes place eighty years before Wolf’s Trail, so I understand why a numbering system might put it first. I decided against that for a practical reason. The book can be read on its own, without reference to the first three. But personally, I feel like it’s a richer, more interesting experience for people who already know the world and care about Maxim and his family.

There’s also a plainer reason. Some of the characters you meet in Phantom Queen are people you’ll already know from the trilogy, and you’ll read their scenes differently when you know what’s coming. It’s a better book read fourth, and that’s the order I wrote it for.

If you’ve already read the trilogy, you’re set. Phantom Queen is a story you can pick right away, and you’ll get the most out of it.

Heat level and tone: All four books are dual POV gaslamp fantasy with monster hunting, a slow-burn romance and an unlikely king. No explicit content.

Where to start today: If you’re new to the series, Wolf’s Trail is where you would want to begin. Read it and the other two books today, so you can be ready for the arrival of…the Phantom Queen!

The Making of A Curious Case: A Claude CoWork Project

Usually, I hold the “making of” posts for these fanfics until a bit later in the serialization, but I wanted to report on this one while my thoughts were fresh.

A Curious Case started out, the way all these AI-drafted fanfics do, with a story idea that I wanted to read but didn’t feel passionate enough to actually write. I knew it was going to be a long, complicated story to tell. I also discovered that Anthropic was running a promotion through most of June and the beginning of July that doubled the user’s session limits when working inside Claude CoWork.

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Video Thursday: Music to Collide Destructively By

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Elizabeth and Darcy dance a waltz to a song about the Hector-Sabrina collision — the ancient asteroid impact that created the very family of rocks they call home. The song is about two objects that found each other in the void, collided, and shattered into thousands of smaller pieces. Human beings have perhaps a similar tendency towards unlikely collision events. From Pride & Planetoids, a sci-fi retelling of Pride and Prejudice set in the Kuiper Belt.

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🎬 ABOUT THESE VIDEOS: These videos feature AI-generated visuals (Midjourney) and music (Suno). The stories themselves are 100% human-written.

Dad Asks: Why Don’t They Just…? (Spoiler Alert)

Now, when I finished writing Pride & Planetoids and was running it through automations and all that jazz, my parents were in the process of moving. They didn’t end up beta reading it the way they do most of my books. When they did read it after it released, Dad asked me: “Why would Terra be willing to let Albion pack up a fleet of resource-rich asteroids and fly them off to the Copernicus system? These rocks sit in a region of space that Terra claims sovereignty over and merely leases to Albion. What’s in it for Terra to allow the exodus at all?”

To answer that, I have to unpack some ideas that are deep in the background of the setting, and not really explained by the characters in the book. Elizabeth Bennet, William Darcy, and Effie Price don’t pay attention to these ideas for the same reason that fish don’t pay attention to water.

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Video Thursday: An Unlikely Rescue

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Elizabeth Bennet claims a dance with William Darcy…not because she wants one, but because she can see exactly what Miss Bingley is about to do, and someone has to stop it. He calls it a rescue. She calls it damage control. They’re both right. From Pride & Planetoids, a sci-fi retelling of Pride and Prejudice set in the Kuiper Belt.

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🎬 ABOUT THESE VIDEOS: These videos feature AI-generated visuals (Midjourney) and music (Suno). The stories themselves are 100% human-written.

Video Thursday: Meet The Bennets

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Meet the Bennets: a parliamentary delegate with a talent for understatement, a mother who thrives on camera, a father who doesn’t, and siblings ranging from quietly brilliant to alarmingly impulsive. They’re quirky. They’re messy. And they’re family. From Pride & Planetoids, a sci-fi retelling of Pride and Prejudice set in the Kuiper Belt.

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#PrideAndPlanetoids #SciFiRomance #SpaceOpera #PrideAndPrejudiceInSpace #JaneAustenRetelling #familydrama #ElizabethBennet #scifisiblings #Bennetfamily #spaceregency

🎬 ABOUT THESE VIDEOS: These videos feature AI-generated visuals (Midjourney) and music (Suno). The stories themselves are 100% human-written.

Video Thursday: Most Unseemly Parasocial Relationships

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William Darcy, reclusive commander of the marcher-ship Last Repose, is doing research on Longbourn Mining Company. Somehow he keeps returning to an interview with Elizabeth Bennet. He finds his parasocial interest in her to be most improper. From Pride & Planetoids, a sci-fi retelling of Pride and Prejudice set in the Kuiper Belt.

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🎬 ABOUT THESE VIDEOS: These videos feature AI-generated visuals (Midjourney) and music (Suno). The stories themselves are 100% human-written.

Thursday Videos: Fire When Ready

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A rogue asteroid is on a collision course with the Lucas settlement. William Darcy doesn’t wait for permission. He teleports the Last Repose alongside it and opens fire. From Pride & Planetoids, a sci-fi retelling of Pride and Prejudice set in the Kuiper Belt. Low heat should not equal low drama. 📚 READ PRIDE & PLANETOIDS NOW! #PrideAndPlanetoids #SciFiRomance #SpaceOpera #PrideAndPrejudiceInSpace #JaneAustenRetelling #spaceaction #asteroidbelt #marchership #scifiaction #competentheroes 🎬 ABOUT THESE VIDEOS: These videos feature AI-generated visuals (Midjourney) and music (Suno). The stories themselves are 100% human-written.

Where Did That Come From? Mr. Darcy, Destroyer of Worlds

(Thank you, unknown internet person, for creating this meme. It makes the job of explaining the origins of my latest novel so much easier.)

Well, let’s start with the fact that I am a GenXer, who grew up with a limited selection of movies available to me, and more often than not the only thing my siblings and I all felt like watching was the 1977 Star Wars. For some reason, I was very amused to discover that Grand Moff Tarkin had once been an energetic middle-aged man who killed the Hound of the Baskervilles twice and Count Dracula over and over again. It tickled me even more to discover that he had once played Mr. Darcy in a now-lost BBC adaptation of Pride and Prejudice, roughly a quarter of a century before Star Wars. I asked myself: “What if Darcy went around destroying planets?” And a surprising amount of Pride & Planetoids grew out of that single question. 

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