Where Did That Come From? Phantom Queen

The Phantom Empire, starring Gene Autry, is a matinee serial that is part musical, part western and part sci-fi adventure. It’s not really very good at being any one of those things, but when I was a kid, it taught me that genre was more of a guideline than an actual rule. That was reinforced by some of the Hindi and Tamil movies I explored as an adult. The musical counterterrorist thriller/romcom Thuppaki, and its Bollywood version Holiday, are good examples of mashups that worked for their target audiences.

At any rate, the main image I retained from The Phantom Empire was of an arrogant woman lording it over an underground city. I made at least one attempt to write my own version of it in middle school. Life went on. I read H. Rider Haggard’s She, and decided the only characters I liked were the narrator/supporting character Horace Holly and Ustane, another supporting character who gets killed because Ayesha (the title character) sees her as competition for the love of boring himbo Leo Vincey.

Haggard wanted people to see Leo as a heroic figure and Ayesha as a tragic anti-heroine destined to be purified (in the sequel) by reincarnation and vaguer forms of woo-woo. He devoted a whole paragraph of his foreword to shooting down Holly/Ayesha shippers, which tells you something about the feedback he was getting before publication. For my part, I mostly felt that Ayesha was a villainess, and Holly was the real hero of the piece, and the Ursula Andress film version from the mid-sixties appealed to me because it…kind of almost looked like the makers agreed with me? At least on Ayesha’s villainy, anyway.

Sometime in the 00s, when I was making my first fumbling attempts to write actual novels, I brainstormed an idea I called The Phantom Queen. It went through a few variations, including a post-apocalyptic western about a couple of roving cowboy troubadours broadcasting from the wasteland, but the gist of it was always the same. The young, dashing man who turns out to be an empty suit; his wiser and kinder mentor; the glamorously evil Queen of a subterranean city; the well-meaning woman forced to serve her and destined to fall for the mentor. I didn’t write it at that time, and it eventually faded to the background.

Then, sometime in the middle of writing Undead Flight, the idea returned to me as a kind of backstory for Maxim os Storm’s parents. The steampunky Drill and the dragon wandered in as well at that point, possibly inspired by the film version of At The Earth’s Core. (No, they don’t call it a dragon in that movie, but as of the point you have a giant fire-breathing lizard that dies to an arrow-shot ala Smaug, it’s a distinction without a difference.)

Some more references to the evil Queen emerged over the course of writing Dragon’s Teeth. By the time I was done with that one, I had a pretty fair idea of what my next book in that setting was going to be. Phantom Queen is a prequel. Maxim’s parents, his uncles, and the underground city where a glamorous woman has been ruling longer than for thousands of years. It is gaslamp fantasy with a Drill, a dragon, and a slow-burn romance. There is no explicit content, and there is plenty of drama.

It comes out on the 16th and is available to preorder now.

If you are new to the series, I would read it fourth. I explain why here.

Hunter Healer King Reading Order, and Why Phantom Queen Goes Last

Once upon a time, Hunter Healer King was a simple trilogy. It told the story of a cowgirl with a knife and a doctor with a gun and a royal destiny. They hunted monsters together, and fell in love. Then, I got interested in telling the story of the doctor’s parents, and that became my upcoming release, Phantom Queen. If you’re new to the series, here’s the order I’d read it in:

  1. Wolf’s Trail: Chloe frees the wrong man, and gets turned into a werewolf for her pains. Maxim turns out to be the only doctor who can cure her.
  2. Undead Flight: Maxim is to be crowned aboard an airship. A monster is lurking somewhere aboard, and Chloe must help him destroy it in between coming to terms with her feelings for him.
  3. Dragon’s Teeth: Chloe’s marriage to Maxim may be doomed before it begins. That won’t stop them from facing down a killer in the city, and a dragon flying over it.
  4. Phantom Queen: Eighty years earlier, Maxim’s father drills into a dying kingdom and meets the woman who will become Maxim’s mother. Out November 16.

That’s publication order, and it’s also the order I’d choose.

The books connect. Each has its own monster-hunting case, but the romance and the kingship carry through all three, and Dragon’s Teeth opens with the aftermath of Undead Flight. Starting with book two might theoretically work, but you’ll be a little behind, and it’s more fun to start at the start.

Why Phantom Queen goes last. It takes place eighty years before Wolf’s Trail, so I understand why a numbering system might put it first. I decided against that for a practical reason. The book can be read on its own, without reference to the first three. But personally, I feel like it’s a richer, more interesting experience for people who already know the world and care about Maxim and his family.

There’s also a plainer reason. Some of the characters you meet in Phantom Queen are people you’ll already know from the trilogy, and you’ll read their scenes differently when you know what’s coming. It’s a better book read fourth, and that’s the order I wrote it for.

If you’ve already read the trilogy, you’re set. Phantom Queen is a story you can pick right away, and you’ll get the most out of it.

Heat level and tone: All four books are dual POV gaslamp fantasy with monster hunting, a slow-burn romance and an unlikely king. No explicit content.

Where to start today: If you’re new to the series, Wolf’s Trail is where you would want to begin. Read it and the other two books today, so you can be ready for the arrival of…the Phantom Queen!

Phantom Queen Complete!

The first draft of my fourteenth novel is done. There’s backfilling and revising left, but it should reach you in mid-November.

The Stormcrows tunnel down in an ancient drill the size of a mansion, to reach a city that has been sealed under the earth for three thousand years and is running out of air. Urban os Storm goes along as the translator: a scholar and monster-hunter who has had eighty years to get good at both, and looks about half that. Mara, twenty years his junior and equally long-lived, keeps the peace in the underground city, trying to shield the common folk from the wrath of their deathless, evil Queen. Then this stranger from the Drill takes apart the centerpiece at the Queen’s midwinter feast and hands it out the gate to the city’s children, one at a time, with a greeting for each of them. Mara has served the Queen for decades and dealt with all kinds of scum, but she’s never met anyone like Urban.

It’s a prequel, but it will be numbered book four in the Hunter Healer King series. Urban and Mara are Maxim’s parents, and I feel like their story works better if you already know Maxim and his world. Since it’s a single book rather than a trilogy, and Urban is a bit more urbane than his son, he and Mara get where they’re going considerably faster than Maxim and Chloe did. Still no explicit content. As with the other books in the series, this is a gaslamp fantasy adventure with a romance growing up around the adventure, rather than the other way around.

I’ve been self-publishing for around ten and a half years. I’m a little horrified to realize that Phantom Queen would bring my average to something like 1.33 books a year. And also…I just turned fifty recently. It seems like I ought to have some kind of wisdom to share, but I can’t think of much. Here’s a few suggestions:

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Yay, My Books Are Now Available on Audible!

These use Amazon’s Virtual Voice feature. I was pleasantly surprised by how convincing these artificial voices were, and I hope you will enjoy them as well. I had to have Claude Cowork resplit the chapters for the ebooks on the Hunter Healer King trilogy, so that each chapter was strictly a Chloe POV or a Maxim POV, because you can’t switch voices midchapter with Virtual Voice. If you have any issues with the new formatting, please let me know. For the Jaiya books, I only had the series collections voiced.

For my fellow writers, I have some additional tips below the cut…

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State of the Author, Summer 2026 Edition

This has been a stressful couple of months, for reasons that I’ve alluded to here and here. The real life stuff mentioned in the second post are still ongoing, so prayers are welcome. In the meantime, here’s what’s happened on the writing front in the meantime:

Three Ladies in Black: done at ~46000 words, except possibly for minor tweaks before formatting, publishing et al. This is the first in a planned series of Ruritanian cozy mysteries with an alt-history angle. Why Ruritanian cozy mysteries with an alt-history angle? Well, if you held a gun to my head, I probably could write something that didn’t sit across three different genres like a disgruntled hippopotamus, but where would be the fun in that? Anyway, the plan is to start a new pen name (possibly implied to be a pseudonym of the femme fatale narrator) and publish the first three together sometime in 2027-2028, then assess how well they do. 

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Big Romance Sale from Hans G. Schantz and L. Jagi Lamplighter!

Hans “Aetherczar” Schantz teams up with L. Jagi Lamplighter, the author of the Books of Unexpected Enlightenment to host a wide variety of romance novels on sale. They have graciously agreed to include my own Pride & Planetoids and my newly released Ancestors of Jaiya Series Collection. Mr. Schantz’s sales always have a huge number of books to choose from. For this one, the host team plan to rotate the books’ positions on the sale page on Saturday and again on Monday to keep it fresh. Be sure and check the sale out today and on those days…something you missed the last time you looked might just turn out to be your new favorite! Also, keep an eye out for frequent commenter Teresa Peschel’s books; she has several in the sale under the pen name Odessa Moon

So, Raptor Write…

This all started when I still had my old computer, and my openrouter credits were running low, so I bought more. Then the old computer died, I decided I didn’t want to mess around with n8n again, recreating all my old automations. On the new computer I started experimenting with python+LM Studio to handle those automations, with Claude doing most of the coding. My openrouter credits were just sitting there not doing anything, so I decided to take Raptor Write, one of the cloud-based AI writing apps, for a spin. Raptor Write is a product of the Future Fiction Academy, which is probably the largest and most ambitious center of the AI first draft movement. (Not affiliated, this is not an endorsement, count your pennies before throwing money at them, etc. Any and all disclaimers may apply.) Raptor Write has a cute mascot, and is free to use except for the “bring your own API key” part. (You do need to create a Teachable account but that is also free). I had been brainstorming a very ridiculous and gothic JAFF concept set in the early 1900s with Claude, and decided generating it in Raptor Write might be a fun way to burn off some of those open router credits.

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AI as Writer’s Assistant: Marketing with AI 

To the extent that I have a philosophy of AI use, it comes to this: I want AI to handle the tasks I don’t enjoy. Falling in love with a set of characters, following them through their adventures, figuring out how the world around them works…to me, those are the fun parts. If I care enough about a story to want to see it on Amazon with a proper cover and a nonzero chance of someone besides me reading it and caring about it, I want to draft it myself. Hunting for typos and logic fails and things I did wrong? Not the fun parts, which is why I have been using AI more in the revision process. Writing a fanfic nobody but me wants to read? Fun but not as fun as it might be, plus it takes mental energy away from writing things that I might be able to sell. Hence, the Fanficcing with Claude label that turns up in this blog. And then there’s marketing. 

Marketing does not come easily to some writers, and I am one of them. When I’m happy with my writing, my opinion of it sounds too egotistical to share. When I’m unhappy with it, my opinion is too depressing for words. As for keywords, blurbs, covers, search engine optimization, noun phrase optimization, my brain tends to lock up or go down unhelpful rabbit holes. So, I turned to AI, first for cover art and blurb help and then for other marketing tasks.  So, a quick rundown on what I’ve done: 

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Capsule Reviews

I figured I’d better update you on things I’ve been reading lately. If the emojis are throwing you, they are addressed to authors who’ve commented here in the past. 

–Tomato Wyrm by Cedar Sanderson: This is a very sweet cozy fantasy with a gardening angle, as the title implies. The heroine inherits a Stately home of England, and its guardian critter, and find love along the way, liberating her future husband from a dreary life in the city along the way. I read this when she serialized it on her substack, and bought the expanded version when that released. This is a great comfort read, Cedar! <3

–Vanished Pearls of Orlov by Odessa Moon: Coming of age sci-fi set on a terraformed Mars with a culture that’s a little bit Napoleonic era Russia and a little bit Wild West. The lead characters are pretty nuanced but the setting steals the show. It’s a fascinating place, Odessa/Teresa. 🙂 

–Theophany by Caroline Furlong: I would say the giant combat medic robot steals the show, except that’s his name in the title and his imposing form on the cover. I loved Theo, Caroline. 😉 

–Advance Guards by Frank Hood: I hesitate to call this one post-apocalyptic, but it’s definitely post-civilization as we know it. A warm family saga built of interconnected stories about picking up the pieces. Well-done, Frank. 🙂 

–Pearl of Fire by C. Chancy: This reminded me a bit of the Chronicles of Elantra by Michelle Sagara, in the sense that it starts as kind of a police/peacekeeper procedural in a fantasy city and escalates from there. I liked these characters better than the cast of Elantra though! 

Cedar Sanderson Reviews The Jaiya Series! Yay!

I’ve known Cedar for a while on Discord, and she has very kindly offered feedback on some of my book covers, but I woke up this morning, sore from moving furniture and number crunching for a replacement computer, to find that she had written a very positive review of my first series on her substack: https://cedarlila.substack.com/p/book-review-the-jaiya-series?publication_id=1528321&utm_campaign=email-post-title&r=3l7wwi&utm_medium=email

Thank you so much, Cedar! This really made my day! I am including your Tomato Wyrm in a post of capsule reviews coming soon to this blog.