Where Did That Come From? Phantom Queen

The Phantom Empire, starring Gene Autry, is a matinee serial that is part musical, part western and part sci-fi adventure. It’s not really very good at being any one of those things, but when I was a kid, it taught me that genre was more of a guideline than an actual rule. That was reinforced by some of the Hindi and Tamil movies I explored as an adult. The musical counterterrorist thriller/romcom Thuppaki, and its Bollywood version Holiday, are good examples of mashups that worked for their target audiences.

At any rate, the main image I retained from The Phantom Empire was of an arrogant woman lording it over an underground city. I made at least one attempt to write my own version of it in middle school. Life went on. I read H. Rider Haggard’s She, and decided the only characters I liked were the narrator/supporting character Horace Holly and Ustane, another supporting character who gets killed because Ayesha (the title character) sees her as competition for the love of boring himbo Leo Vincey.

Haggard wanted people to see Leo as a heroic figure and Ayesha as a tragic anti-heroine destined to be purified (in the sequel) by reincarnation and vaguer forms of woo-woo. He devoted a whole paragraph of his foreword to shooting down Holly/Ayesha shippers, which tells you something about the feedback he was getting before publication. For my part, I mostly felt that Ayesha was a villainess, and Holly was the real hero of the piece, and the Ursula Andress film version from the mid-sixties appealed to me because it…kind of almost looked like the makers agreed with me? At least on Ayesha’s villainy, anyway.

Sometime in the 00s, when I was making my first fumbling attempts to write actual novels, I brainstormed an idea I called The Phantom Queen. It went through a few variations, including a post-apocalyptic western about a couple of roving cowboy troubadours broadcasting from the wasteland, but the gist of it was always the same. The young, dashing man who turns out to be an empty suit; his wiser and kinder mentor; the glamorously evil Queen of a subterranean city; the well-meaning woman forced to serve her and destined to fall for the mentor. I didn’t write it at that time, and it eventually faded to the background.

Then, sometime in the middle of writing Undead Flight, the idea returned to me as a kind of backstory for Maxim os Storm’s parents. The steampunky Drill and the dragon wandered in as well at that point, possibly inspired by the film version of At The Earth’s Core. (No, they don’t call it a dragon in that movie, but as of the point you have a giant fire-breathing lizard that dies to an arrow-shot ala Smaug, it’s a distinction without a difference.)

Some more references to the evil Queen emerged over the course of writing Dragon’s Teeth. By the time I was done with that one, I had a pretty fair idea of what my next book in that setting was going to be. Phantom Queen is a prequel. Maxim’s parents, his uncles, and the underground city where a glamorous woman has been ruling longer than for thousands of years. It is gaslamp fantasy with a Drill, a dragon, and a slow-burn romance. There is no explicit content, and there is plenty of drama.

It comes out on the 16th and is available to preorder now.

If you are new to the series, I would read it fourth. I explain why here.

Hunter Healer King Reading Order, and Why Phantom Queen Goes Last

Once upon a time, Hunter Healer King was a simple trilogy. It told the story of a cowgirl with a knife and a doctor with a gun and a royal destiny. They hunted monsters together, and fell in love. Then, I got interested in telling the story of the doctor’s parents, and that became my upcoming release, Phantom Queen. If you’re new to the series, here’s the order I’d read it in:

  1. Wolf’s Trail: Chloe frees the wrong man, and gets turned into a werewolf for her pains. Maxim turns out to be the only doctor who can cure her.
  2. Undead Flight: Maxim is to be crowned aboard an airship. A monster is lurking somewhere aboard, and Chloe must help him destroy it in between coming to terms with her feelings for him.
  3. Dragon’s Teeth: Chloe’s marriage to Maxim may be doomed before it begins. That won’t stop them from facing down a killer in the city, and a dragon flying over it.
  4. Phantom Queen: Eighty years earlier, Maxim’s father drills into a dying kingdom and meets the woman who will become Maxim’s mother. Out November 16.

That’s publication order, and it’s also the order I’d choose.

The books connect. Each has its own monster-hunting case, but the romance and the kingship carry through all three, and Dragon’s Teeth opens with the aftermath of Undead Flight. Starting with book two might theoretically work, but you’ll be a little behind, and it’s more fun to start at the start.

Why Phantom Queen goes last. It takes place eighty years before Wolf’s Trail, so I understand why a numbering system might put it first. I decided against that for a practical reason. The book can be read on its own, without reference to the first three. But personally, I feel like it’s a richer, more interesting experience for people who already know the world and care about Maxim and his family.

There’s also a plainer reason. Some of the characters you meet in Phantom Queen are people you’ll already know from the trilogy, and you’ll read their scenes differently when you know what’s coming. It’s a better book read fourth, and that’s the order I wrote it for.

If you’ve already read the trilogy, you’re set. Phantom Queen is a story you can pick right away, and you’ll get the most out of it.

Heat level and tone: All four books are dual POV gaslamp fantasy with monster hunting, a slow-burn romance and an unlikely king. No explicit content.

Where to start today: If you’re new to the series, Wolf’s Trail is where you would want to begin. Read it and the other two books today, so you can be ready for the arrival of…the Phantom Queen!

So, Raptor Write…

This all started when I still had my old computer, and my openrouter credits were running low, so I bought more. Then the old computer died, I decided I didn’t want to mess around with n8n again, recreating all my old automations. On the new computer I started experimenting with python+LM Studio to handle those automations, with Claude doing most of the coding. My openrouter credits were just sitting there not doing anything, so I decided to take Raptor Write, one of the cloud-based AI writing apps, for a spin. Raptor Write is a product of the Future Fiction Academy, which is probably the largest and most ambitious center of the AI first draft movement. (Not affiliated, this is not an endorsement, count your pennies before throwing money at them, etc. Any and all disclaimers may apply.) Raptor Write has a cute mascot, and is free to use except for the “bring your own API key” part. (You do need to create a Teachable account but that is also free). I had been brainstorming a very ridiculous and gothic JAFF concept set in the early 1900s with Claude, and decided generating it in Raptor Write might be a fun way to burn off some of those open router credits.

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Video Thursday: Bee Movie Outtakes Edition

Midjourney had opinions. So did my characters. 🐝
Sometimes AI art gives you exactly what you asked for, and sometimes…Well. Your heroine refuses to look frightened and your hero has a bee-related explanation for everything. This is that second kind of video.

🐝 A tip of the hat to Cedar Sanderson who came up with “Sorry, there was a bee”.

📚 Chloe and Maxim star in the Hunter Healer King gaslamp fantasy trilogy by Mel Dunay: steampunk monster hunting, slow-burn romance, and apparently bees.

📚 READ THE TRILOGY: Book 1 – Wolf’s Trail: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CR81P9QP Book 2 – Undead Flight: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DNGWVPMH Book 3 – Dragon’s Teeth: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0GB86H4N5 Complete series: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CR7ZL3S7

Speaking Thukiel: The Lost Language of Thule | Hunter Healer King

Three thousand years after Thule sank beneath the waves, its language survives in fragments.

The Stormcrows still use Thukiel in certain ceremonies. Banishing daggers carry runes in the ancient tongue. The Pledge of Arent, which binds a king to the Armor, must be spoken in Thukiel, and the speaker must mean every word.

This is the language of a civilization that built airships and tamed gravity, that imprisoned demons and fell to its own hubris. And in the world of the Hunter Healer King trilogy, Thukiel isn’t just history: it’s power.

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The Armor of Arent: A Forty-Foot Mecha Waiting for the Hunter Healer King

Three thousand years ago, when Arent os Storm fled the fall of Thule, he brought with him more than just survivors and ancient knowledge.

He brought a weapon.

The Armor of Arent is a forty-foot-tall mecha in the shape of a knight in armor, with a crow-faced visor on the helmet, framed by wings. It can walk, it can fly, and it’s been waiting for a king worthy to pilot it. It may have finally found one.

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Kallomancers and Their Leeches: The Most Dangerous Algomancers in Hunter Healer King

Maxim os Storm was a young man away at university when a kallomancer and her leeches attacked the airship carrying his parents.

The creatures tore through passengers and crew, drinking blood and spreading terror. By the time it was over, Maxim had lost his parents and other family members to the monsters many hunters consider the most dangerous algomancers of all.

This is personal for him. And for the Stormcrows who survived that night, kallomancers represent a threat that can never be forgiven.

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The Three Mysterious Metals of Thule: the Secret Technology of Hunter Healer King

What if Atlantis fell…but left behind liquid metal that could heal any wound, steel that defies gravity, and an energy source that could power engines for millennia?

Three thousand years ago, when Thule sank beneath the waves, the Stormcrows escaped with more than just their lives. They carried the secrets of three mysterious metals, created during the first Immortal War before mortals walked the earth. These metals, known as floatsteel, quicksteel, and burnsteel, are the backbone of this world’s technology.

Airships fly because of floatsteel. Dr. Maxim os Storm heals the wounded with quicksteel. And burnsteel powers steam engines that can run for centuries without fuel.

This is the lost technology of Thule, and it’s everywhere in the Hunter Healer King trilogy…once you know where to look.

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Necromancers and Their Wights: The Walking Dead in Hunter Healer King

The dead don’t rest easy in the Old World.

Necromancers summon evil spirits from the underworld and bind them into corpses, creating shambling servants called wights. And if a wight bites you? You might join their ranks.

They are a type of algomancer: feeding on pain and fear like other dark sorcerers. They bring their own particular horror to the world of the Hunter Healer King trilogy.

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The Empire of Noricum In Hunter Healer King: Where Monsters Walk and Airships Fly

Imagine 19th century Budapest, but with airships overhead, monsters in the shadows, and an elected emperor who’s mostly a figurehead.

Welcome to Noricum, the sprawling empire where the Hunter Healer King trilogy takes place. It’s a land of steam-powered innovation and ancient bloodlines, where Dr. Maxim os Storm hunts algomancers through gaslit streets and Chloe Fortebat discovers that the “Old World” is far stranger than she ever imagined.

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