For more information about this project, please see past posts under the “Sense and Sensibility and Placage” category. Claude managed to leave Marianne – Mari. Fricking. Anne – out of the first draft of this scene. This is the second. I cut a whole two paragraphs of blah blah at the beginning and trimmed other bits throughout. My main takeaway from this particular ai fanfic has been that I do not remotely have the patience to ride herd on a book length ai first draft and make it good enough for publication. Anyway, I hope you’ve enjoyed this fanfic. Stay tuned for The Rector’s Other Business, coming sometime in May.

Departure

For more information about this project, please see past posts under the “Sense and Sensibility and Placage” category. Claude has the reputation of being good at writing climactic scenes and rather overwrought for everything else. This was the kind of scene at which it excels. I trimmed a little bombast before and after the duel itself, and Claude’s persistant and unlikely references to cold January weather in New Orleans.

The Duel

For more information about this project, please see past posts under the “Sense and Sensibility and Placage” category. Not much to report about the drafting process. Claude was surprisingly gung ho about outlining this, arguing that this particular handling of the leadup to the duel would be the most cathartic for Morin and the readers. This is the AI’s first draft, with the usual human streamlining.

The Challenge

For more information about this project, please see past posts under the “Sense and Sensibility and Placage” category. Claude drafted this scene out of order, so I had to trim a fair amount to bring it into continuity with scenes that take place earlier but were written later. I did like Claude’s take on how Elise’s revelation affected Marianne. I also liked that it assigned Morin a rather skeptical opinion of Rousseau.

Marianne’s Recovery

For more information about this project, please see past posts under the “Sense and Sensibility and Placage” category. Nothing exciting about this one, except that I had to shuffle things on wordpress a bit so that it came before tomorrow’s Marianne scene. First Claude draft below the cut; trimmed and tweaked.

The Proposal

For more information about this project, please see past posts under the “Sense and Sensibility and Placage” category. This is a tricky scene because it deals with sensitive issues. What we have below is Claude’s first draft, with more tweaking than usual by me, especially surrounding Elise’s big reveal to Marianne.

The Revelation

For more information about this project, please see past posts under the “Sense and Sensibility and Placage” category. This final stretch of the book was very messy at an outline level, so I had to talk Claude through re-outlining these last 6-7 scenes. The first draft had Louis Palmiere (Mrs. Jennings’s son-in-law) and Lucie Acier in place where I did not want them to be. This is Claude’s second draft, with the usual trimmings and tweakings.

Edward’s Declaration

First off, happy tenth anniversary to my blog! For more information about this fanfic project, check out the earlier posts in the category “Sense and Sensibility and Placage.” This was a good example of why you can’t turn your back on the LLMs. Claude’s initial draft had the Villarreal-Mendoza wedding happening in March, and frost on the River Road. I haven’t been to South Louisiana in a long time, but I remembered enough of the climate to be pretty sure frost was not a routine occurrence, and I’m Catholic enough to know that Lent was not considered to be an optimal time for weddings. What is below is the draft that resulted from my polite discussion with Claude about these issues. I hand-fixed some logistics issues related to the carriage and as usual trimmed the more overwrought bits.

The Fever