Video Thursday: Mecha vs Dragon Edition

https://youtube.com/shorts/uzB7gH_NEUo

⚠️ SPOILER WARNING for Books 1-2

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Kallomancers and Their Leeches: The Most Dangerous Algomancers in Hunter Healer King

Maxim os Storm was a young man away at university when a kallomancer and her leeches attacked the airship carrying his parents.

The creatures tore through passengers and crew, drinking blood and spreading terror. By the time it was over, Maxim had lost his parents and other family members to the monsters many hunters consider the most dangerous algomancers of all.

This is personal for him. And for the Stormcrows who survived that night, kallomancers represent a threat that can never be forgiven.

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Fanficcing with Claude: Sense and Sensibility and Placage, Scene 2

For more information on this fanfic project and why I outsourced the drafting of it to Claude, see the previous post in the “Sense and Sensibility and Placage” category. Claude completed this scene in five and a fraction drafts. It started out with a confused approach to the will, which draft two corrected after I set it on the right path. It also had John Dashwood offering a cottage (supposed to be the property of Mrs. Jennings) to his half-sisters. I got it to correct that and the em-dashes in draft three. The last fractional draft was to address a particular bit where John Dashwood talks around how much money he’s going to give his stepmother/half-sisters per annum. I sympathized with Claude’s desire not to specify an amount in currency, but I thought there was a better way of not committing ourselves, and asked for a redraft. Then I realized that Celeste Dashwood, the heroines’ mother really needed to be present and at least somewhat active for this scene. And then I caught a couple of other minor things I wanted to correct, so then came draft five. Eleonore’s last line in the scene is my rewording of Claude, and minor edits by me were also made for continuity with later scenes.

The Promise and Its Breaking

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Fanficcing with Claude: Sense and Sensibility and Placage, Scene 1

Up til now, the only writing projects I have let Claude draft are fanfics that I wanted to read but don’t care enough to write myself. This one is a retelling of S&S set in New Orleans in 1813-1814 with the female leads as placées. In this case, I did so partly because I felt uncomfortable with trying to recreate the often downbeat tone of the source novel. Another reason I undertook this was to get a better feel for Claude’s project feature. I will probably do a process post either at the end of this experiment or maybe the midway point. Below the cut is Claude’s third draft of the first. Its first draft elided any discussion of the heroines’ ethnicity and social status, which is pretty important to this retelling. After I had it fix that, I told it to eliminate the em-dashes (which it tried to argue with me about) and rework a labored metaphor about Henry Dashwood’s illness. The result is below the cut.

The Death of Henry Dashwood

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So, Claude CoWork

Since my last series of AI process posts, the much hyped Claude CoWork finally came to Windows. I was curious about it, so I upgraded to a Claude Pro account. I am enjoying the increased chatbot usage that comes with a Pro account. Claude, possibly, is not. Periodically it starts gently hinting that we are DONE with a particular subtopic and need to MOVE ON. As for CoWork itself, the Windows version is very glitchy. I’ve only gotten a modest amount of useful work out of it. Specifically, I wanted to go back and make clearer POV shift indicators for some of my past novels. I put the manuscripts in a subfolder of the only folder on the computer that CoWork has access to. Then I asked CoWork to review each manuscript, and write a report which quotes the first sentence after each POV shift. Here’s a couple observations:

-Opus 4.6 glitches out less often than Sonnet 4.6 does in Cowork mode, but lives up to its reputation as a usage hog. Reviewing one 50K-ish word manuscript and writing the report on it used up most of a Pro Plan usage session. I ended up running these tasks at times when my session limits had reset, and I did not expect to need Claude for a while. Late at night, early in the morning, times like that.

-Even Opus 4.6 glitches out in CoWork when asked to write fanfic. This might be a guardrail related to Anthropic’s predominantly corporate focus for CoWork. Or maybe I’m not giving it clear enough instructions. As you can see from the past “Fanficcing with Claude” posts, I tend to be pretty general in my fanficcing instructions.

-My initial feeling is that CoWork is going to be most useful for tasks too large for a chatbot and too specific to justify building a whole automation, but we’ll see how it goes.

Video Thursday: Crazy Crow Edition

https://youtube.com/shorts/riN4_268kWw

Stormcrows (the people) are named after stormcrows (the birds) for good reason. Maxim’s stormcrow companion wants to ride aboard the luxury airship. Animal telepathy meets steampunk technology in Undead Flight, Book 2 of the Hunter Healer King trilogy.

The Three Mysterious Metals of Thule: the Secret Technology of Hunter Healer King

What if Atlantis fell…but left behind liquid metal that could heal any wound, steel that defies gravity, and an energy source that could power engines for millennia?

Three thousand years ago, when Thule sank beneath the waves, the Stormcrows escaped with more than just their lives. They carried the secrets of three mysterious metals, created during the first Immortal War before mortals walked the earth. These metals, known as floatsteel, quicksteel, and burnsteel, are the backbone of this world’s technology.

Airships fly because of floatsteel. Dr. Maxim os Storm heals the wounded with quicksteel. And burnsteel powers steam engines that can run for centuries without fuel.

This is the lost technology of Thule, and it’s everywhere in the Hunter Healer King trilogy…once you know where to look.

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Notebooks

Having gone on at great length about my AI secretaries, I guess I should show you the…more analogue side of my writing process: notebooks. (Disclaimer: I do not use fountain pens and cannot vouch for whether any of these are good for fountain pens.)

I don’t generally “journal” in the conventional sense of writing about my day or my feelings or whatever. (Although this year I’m trying to do gratitude journaling as a Lenten resolution.) I do write up todos to myself, when I am really concerned, or notes after doctor’s visit, or notes when comparison shopping for major purposes. But mostly, I take notes on stories I’m thinking about writing. I collect a lot of cool notebooks, and I also make my own, with varying degrees of success. Below the cut, a couple of examples, with excerpts from the writing process that produced Pride & Planetoids.

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