Writer PSA

Always try to collect all your notes on a particular story in one place somewhere. I was reading some books about writing mysteries, remembered a failed mystery idea(1) I had done a lot of world building for, went to look up the Scrivener file I had for it, and discovered that a). it took me an embarrassingly long time to find it because I’d named the file after a relatively trivial story element I wasn’t interested in using anymore and b). although I had successfully corralled the setting notes om scriv(2) and some general ideas on the two detectives, I did not have notes on my plot ideas.

And okay, when I did a deep dive into the notebooks I was using around the time I was brainstorming this, I found that my plot ideas were mostly pretty lame, and that was why I hadn’t taken them seriously enough to put them into Scrivener, but I would have saved myself a certain amount of trouble if I had.

(1) it was one of the iterations of the Feisty Girl/Posh Guy concept that eventually led to Wolf’s Trail, would have been maybe 3a or 4a on this list or this list.

(2) Incredibly important because I had zeroed in on, and even mapped, a tiny bit of Slovenia in an alternate post-WWI, with history on why it was previously its own principality going back several generations and including an alternate wife for a guy who saved Emperor Franz-Josef from an assassination attempt and an additional daughter for Queen Victoria.

Rings of Power: Impressions of ep 208 and the Series to Date

Okay, let’s get the big important news out of the way: the official renewal of the series for season 3 is expected any day now, the show runners have pretty strongly shot down the suggestion that the Dark Wizard of Rhun (Ciaran Hinds’s character) is Saruman, and the writer’s room for season 3 is acquiring writers from The Crown and Coronation Street. The first is welcome news to anyone with half a brain, because it makes no sense for Saruman – who in LOTR had been seen for a long time as a helpful but perhaps flawed ally – to be Obviously Evil when Gandalf first encounters him. The second is promising news because one of the show’s most crippling weaknesses in these first two seasons was the writers’ inability to mimic Britspeak, especially the dignified idiom Tolkien used for the Elves and Dunedain. I hope the new writers help with that.

Anyway, on with the usual disjointed thoughts and spoilers for all kinds of things:

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Rings of Power: Impressions of Episode 207

Probably the best or second-best episode of the season, with the main defects being a couple of mildly bad turns of phrase(1) and some weird plot contrivances going around Galadriel. Keep in mind, though, that the middle of season 1 of this show really lowered the bar for all the other episodes before and since, so “best/second-best episode of the less flawed of the two seasons of Rings of Power made to date” is not the biggest compliment ever.

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Music by Suno Monday: Rikki Tikki Tavi

I know the female vocalist is kind of a different choice, but just pretend that it’s Rikki’s ally, the female tailor-bird, singing: https://suno.com/song/9b369786-912d-41d6-aa94-9c456021ea54

Also none of the male versions that Suno generated really captured the menacing agility of Rikki the mongoose and Nag the cobra.

If you’re not familiar with the story, the Chuck Jones adaptation is pretty faithful, with word for word narration by Orson Welles, and can be viewed here: https://archive.org/details/rikkitikkitavi_201701

Rings of Power: Impressions of Ep 206

*Waggles hand* Meh. About on par with the last one, maybe a shade less good. Charlie Vickers groupies and the idiots who think Middle Earth is all about the fight scenes might grade it more generously than I do. In other news, my cowatchers and I have been rewatching (and for the most part enjoying) the extended editions of the LOTR movies, and I may put up a post about that at some point in the near future. The main relevant points for now are that watching ROP and LOTR side by side a). really underlines how much better Jackson/Walsh/Boyens were at simulating Tolkienesque dialogue than the ROP team, and b). how much ROP unnecessarily remixes bits from the movies, especially bits that were so inane that I recognized them at the time I saw the originals in the LOTR rewatch but they’ve fallen out of my head by now.

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State of the Author, Late 2024

The sequel to Wolf’s Trail is in the late stages of drafting – about 48K with maybe a couple thousand more words to go. Just moving very slowly because I’ve been sick with some respiratory thing for over a month and a half at this point. Starting to do better, which means the creative brain(1) is starting to come back online. With some luck, I should be done by the end of September, take some time off to work on other stuff in October, polish it in November, release by the end of December (around the same time the first book did last year).

(1) as opposed to the critical brain, which you’ve seen a lot of lately with the Jane Austen adaptation posts and the Rings of Power posts

Rings of Power: Impressions of ep 204

Season one had an almost U-shaped quality graph, with opening and closing episodes that weren’t perfect but were at least trying to do interesting things and a stretch of middle episodes that felt laborious and contrived. Reader, we are once again sliding to the bottom of the U….

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